i will try to sneak on after school but cant on Tuesday-Thursday cuz i go to a after school program thats fun so i wont be on at thoses days but still i may or not be on Monday due to perhaps a lot of hw just so you know
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br>charchar wrote:i will try to sneak on after school but cant on Tuesday-Thursday (Good job on capitalizing.) cuz i go to a after school program thats fun (insert a comma here) so i wont be on at thoses days(Golly, what a run-on sentence. Cut it off around here and start a new sentence)but still i(I still) may or not be on Monday (Again, good job with the caps.) due to perhaps (unnecessary) a lot of hw (No need for shorthand, you're typing. It literally would take less than 5 seconds for you to type out "homework".)(insert a comma) just so you know(insert a period.)
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