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1 may be on during the week on Sat Sep 08, 2012 9:20 pm

i will try to sneak on after school but cant on Tuesday-Thursday cuz i go to a after school program thats fun so i wont be on at thoses days but still i may or not be on Monday due to perhaps a lot of hw just so you know

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2 Re: may be on during the week on Sun Sep 09, 2012 7:29 pm

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Can't* an* that's* won't* those* and alright.



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3 Re: may be on during the week on Sat Sep 15, 2012 6:02 pm

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charchar wrote:i will try to sneak on after school but cant on Tuesday-Thursday (Good job on capitalizing.) cuz i go to a after school program thats fun (insert a comma here) so i wont be on at thoses days(Golly, what a run-on sentence. Cut it off around here and start a new sentence)but still i(I still) may or not be on Monday (Again, good job with the caps.) due to perhaps (unnecessary) a lot of hw (No need for shorthand, you're typing. It literally would take less than 5 seconds for you to type out "homework".)(insert a comma) just so you know(insert a period.)


I will try to sneak on after school but can't on Tuesday-Thursday 'cause I go to an after school program that's fun, so I won't be on on those days. I still may or not be on Monday due to a lot of homework, just so you know.

Still could use some work, but you're improving slightly Char. Keep at it, soon you'll have pretty good grammar.



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