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1 murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:59 pm

Chapter 1 the arrival

"Where are they?" Bob said. "I dont know," Rick said. All of a sudden a axe killed Rick and the guy with the axe threw it at Bob and the murderer was me? I wake up from the strange dream to see olivia, Levi, Poke, Gus, and Mikey being random and stuff. "Guys I just had a strange dream and im to the point were i just want to be to the castle we were going to," I said. "shhhhhhhh," mikey said. "Im watching the TV," mikey said. "um why boris," poke said. "cuz he can," gus said. "When will we be there," levi said. "I dont know now derp :3," I said derply. "If I can't sleep i will go zelos on you all," olivia said. Then we shuted up and we arrived. We all got a room and started to go into our rooms when there was a scream. It was from levis room."WHATS HAPPENING BRO," I said trying and failing to be epic for no reason. silence. I went in and levi was on the floor, dead.

chapter 2 the next murdering

"WHO KILLED LEVI >Sad," I yelled at the top of my lungs. "I dont know i just dont know, " poke said. mikey went to levi's corpse and stared at it for a long time. "Ah h... never mind," he said. I then grabbed my detecive coat and hat and said, "I will solve this mystery!" "Really stewart really," olivia said. "Yes really :3," I said. "We should stay together so we can find the murderer," poke said. "Good idea," gus said."But were should we stay though?" Poke said. "My room because I don't have much stuff the murderer can use," I said. "Surreee Mr.I like swords," Olivia said. I just roll my eyes."I brought the ones only i know how to use." Later That Night. "AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH." I was up and at the screaming persons side before anyone. The one who screamed was... mikey.

part 3

"Oh my gosh," poke said turning her head from the corpse of mikey."Ok the murderer used a rubber duck somehow and did all of this," I said."HOW CAN THAT EVEN HAPPEN THOUGH," gus shouted for reasons I don't know."Stewart said no one but him can use the we-," Olivia said till a dart went into her neck killing her with poison. "NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO," I said."My 2 RL friends gone Sad," i shouted at the top of my lungs.Suddenly someone was at the door. it was kitty."Sorry the bus was later then it should have been," she said. I told her what happened when she wasnt here. "Thats terrible," she said. That night I toke watch and saw a shadowy figure. It was mikey, olivia, and Levi."W-w-what the-" "we can talk for long the killer we didnt see but we know is none of anyone here its its-" then they disapeared to where they were now. I knew only 2 or 3 people people who it could be.

part 4 the suspects

As I went down stairs to the house of where I will meet the suspects I toke a can of troll repel just incase. When I entered they were there. They were Weegee, Vult, and Rex."Ok you all know one of you may be a killer so lets get this through," I said."Pppfffff why should I lol," Weegee said."Cause one of us are a murderer," Rex said."Real fast whos the murderer gotten stewart," Vult said."Mikey and 2 friends of mine." Suddenly The lights went out and Vult and Rex where gone."What the-," I said when Weegee tryed to stab me with a knife. I blocked it with a sword I had with me and he ran to the castle. Weegee was the murderer of Mikey, Olivia, Levi, and possibly Vult and Rex.

Final revenge

I charged into Weegee and the stairs knocking both of us down. He pulled out a sword and so did I and we battled. I slashed at his leg, but missed, then he missed me as well. I did a multislash attack hitting him a few times. He caught me off guard in the shoulder, it was strong anoth to make me fall down to the ground."Hehehehe," Weegee said."What?" "I win and I will forever," Weegee said. "OH REALLY?" someone said. It was Poke Gus Rex Vult and Levi, Olivia, and Mikey?!?!?!?!?!"What the-," Weegee started when i threw a boot at his head while saying "BOOT TO THE HEAD." Before I finished him a dark spirit came out of him. It was a demon contraling him. I slayed it with my sword and helped him up."Looks like a few of us where used as puppets." "Ya," Weegee said before we shook hands out of respect.

Epiloge

"STEWART WHERES THE CAKE!" Weegee shouted. "I put a piece in everyones room," I shouted back before tripping on a rubber duck and almost falling down the stairs. So no one got rid of the duck that murdered one of us I thought. I smiled and put it in my memory storage in my room before closing it to celerbrate the most hardest case I've solved and for peace between all of us.
This story is now closed till I say one more thing, Who at first did you think till the 5 and epiloge chapter? post in comants please.



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2 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:08 pm

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O snap. Some sheit went down. Good job! Very Happy **le about to read the other part you posted**



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3 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:19 pm

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You literary genius. LMFAO.



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4 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:45 pm

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Gus wrote:You literary genius. LMFAO.

I still haven't read the story, but this exactly.
LMFAO.



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5 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:55 pm

ty gus for what you said Smile

[Moderator] You should really get an avatar, Char. It makes me uncomfortable looking at a blank space.
Also, thanks for extending your post.



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6 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:27 pm

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another rule you may not be aware of: your posts must contain a minimum of four words



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7 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:28 pm

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Oh, now you abide by the rules?
That's worse than breaking them.
LMFAO.



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8 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:33 pm

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i've always supported the rules, i just don't follow them



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9 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:36 pm

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...
That.
Makes.
Sense?
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10 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:38 pm

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yes, it does.



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11 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:58 pm

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I'll just go with it.
LMFAO.



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12 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:59 pm

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the same way supporting gay marriage doesn't make me gay



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13 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:14 pm

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But you ar-
Solid argument.
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14 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:18 pm

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or how some men are pro choice, even though they don't get pregnant



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15 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:22 pm

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I don't see where this is going.
LMFAO.



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16 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:08 pm

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i was averting everyone's attention



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17 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sat Jun 02, 2012 11:28 pm

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Now you must pay.



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18 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 12:31 am

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pay for what hobo



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19 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:11 am

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You am no real super sand.



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20 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:37 am

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my bro is a hobo in the dojo oh he's a slow-mo tiger with dough



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21 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:24 am

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You rhyming master.
Obviously witchcraft.



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22 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:34 am

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dang no mang this shines my blang blang
i'll show myself out now Sad



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23 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:39 am

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Blang blang?
Ooh eeeeeeeeeeeeh?
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24 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:16 pm

lol who put the storys into this lol

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25 Re: murderer of ziroton on Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:44 pm

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MOTHER OF PLOT TWISTS. LMFAO.



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